Feedback: Promising first essay, sophia
www: you've revised some very details well; decent structure.
LR: You need to question the congromeratics and consider how they're promoting dominant ideologies profiting most - consider Paretos law. Write a paragraph on this.
Grade: C- 27/48
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Contromatics are promoting dominant ideologies as for example, these can be things such as apps, news online, music/movies online, games and many more. Due to these audiences have access have a greater variety of views and values. The internet is consulted mainly by the younger generation as they have more access to it via schools and mobile phones. Although, access to it for adults is increasing. For example, 18.3 million households in the UK has access in 2009 compared to 2 million in 2006, however has risen to 33% in 2013. The internet is used for a variety of things, such as looking up information, playing music and many more. Also, Paretos law says that.
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